I don't like to sound...

I don't like to sound negative, but isn't it target a little bit too ambitious?　ネガティブに聞こえなければいいのですが、目標はちょっと意欲的すきませんか？

i don't want to sound like a busybody, but I wonder if you could send her an Email. おせっかいするつもりはないけど、 

busybody ビｨｽﾞｨ ﾎﾞﾃﾞｨ　n)おせっかい屋